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    Inactive Member machinery's Avatar
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    type out all dreams:

    poor puddles of drool drops
    in the morning ? excitement
    i must remember and recollect

    type out all haiku:

    miniscule moments,
    a slim sum of measurement,
    a small semblance in structured words

    searching for serenity,
    trying to assemble
    the broken pieces of
    Buson Yosa's peace.

    bulk up manuscript:

    I'm tired of looking at the flimsy
    thing.
    my words aren't strong
    enough.

    inked, anterior instants,
    pink, inferior intellect

    work on novel:

    find a worthy
    purpose,
    make the text worthwhile,
    precise

    I must write for all the
    people inside of me,
    the people
    near me, and all the rest ?
    the plethora of people
    I don't know, or will ever know.
    but I must give it a go

    write the last love letter:

    this longing has lasted too long
    I don't know where I belong since she's been gone.

    I'm tired of this pretense between the two of us.

    I must
    pepper her
    and
    attack her
    until all the question marks have melted
    away.

    find myself:

    I'm tired of what I'm not becoming.

    I'm lost in the addiction of thinking.
    I'm weak in this constant state of not forgetting the past.
    I don't want to play around anymore.

    I will not become another small town-mustached factory worker.
    That I must recant.

    It's time to unfold the plans
    and act.

    I must.

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    This sounds like how I've felt for the past couple months.

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    I've known you for a long time my friend...
    and I must say, this is another level of your writing.
    I REALLY REALLY liked this peice.
    Everything clicked so nicely... the words, and the pauses were wonderful.
    I can't say enough about this peice.
    It was awesome.
    Nuff' said.

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    For anyone too lazy to go look for it i thought i'd bump this up for you [img]biggrin.gif[/img]

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